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Thursday, 11 June 2015
Nightmare at Z beach
I am leaning about to write a recount about the ANZAC landings.
I am so proud of my title I picked a good one.
it can be tricky to use punctuation.
My teacher can help me with my punctuation.
The next step for me is to work on my spelling.
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You have put a lot of effort into writing your ANZAC Recount. I am impressed with how you have sequenced your recount and added details to allow the reader to visualise what is going on.
1 comment:
You have put a lot of effort into writing your ANZAC Recount. I am impressed with how you have sequenced your recount and added details to allow the reader to visualise what is going on.
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