Thursday, 11 June 2015

Nightmare at Z beach


I am leaning about to write a recount about  the ANZAC landings.
I am so proud of my title I picked a good one.
it can be tricky to use punctuation.
My teacher can help me with my punctuation.
The next step for me is to work on my spelling.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

You have put a lot of effort into writing your ANZAC Recount. I am impressed with how you have sequenced your recount and added details to allow the reader to visualise what is going on.